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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(38)写作:幸福是什么

发布时间:2013-09-22 17:32浏览次数:512
要求:

近期,央视特别调查节目 “幸福是什么”爆红网络。 你们班也就“幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论,学生们发表了自己的看法, 你也发表了看法, 

你认为:

1.在学校过着幸福的生活,。。。
2.在家里过着幸福的生活,。。。
3.周围的人相处。。。。;互相。。。
4.你认为当你做。。。 你也会感到幸福。
要求:
1. 每个要点的内容需用三四句话展开合理想象, 进行适当发挥。

2. 词数90左右, 开头和结尾已给出, 不记入总词数。 注意书写和标点符号的规范使用。


Happiness is for everyone.__________________________
When I think these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

请作者增加高级词汇的使用,单词拼写做的很好;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Happiness For most of people, judging happiness quotient look like a philosophy problem. People can easily think it over too long. They will consider their family’s economic condition, friend relationship, their childhood and even school achievement. Then, this simple question will become a real headache cause nobody can accuracy measure happiness by so many factors. For me, happiness is not complicated but simple. I do not think about it by what I have but what I get from others and what I give to others. When someone asked me if I was happy, the first thing flashed in my mind was my most darling parent. They love and nurture me and take care of every need. Whenever I felt blue or tired, I knew my family was always waiting for me to have a rest. Then, I would also miss my friends who companied with me for a long time. The warm and precious friendship helped me though hard time and made me happy. These feelings told me that Instead of complaining about what’s wrong, be grateful for what’s right. Showing our love and concern for strangers is another way to gain happiness. Last year, I had an unforgettable trip in Tibet. Before leaving, I bought a few notebooks and bags for the possibility to help poor children. As I truly met those lovely children and put the notebooks in their little hands, I found a sense of happiness. The happiest are not those who own all the best things, but those who can appreciate the beauty of life. Love, kindness and thankfulness are all good character to hold onto the happiness. So next time when anyone asks you if you are happy, just show your confidence and say ‘I am definitely happy!’

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