黑龙江大庆实验中学2013届高三下学期4月月考试卷英语作文

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Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for attending our company’s news conference. As you know, nowadays it is difficult to look after the elder ages, but we shouldn't left them at home without being cared, so our company created a kind of house robort. This kind of robort can cook on schedule and the time is adjustable. It can also chat with the old, play chess with the old and even help the old do sports. It can also do first aid to help the old when nesseary.