高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Nanjing,located in the southeast of China,is the capital of Jiangsu province.It has a population of nearly 5 million.Nanjing has a history of more than 2400 years,there was ten dynasties established in it.The climate is pleasant.There are many tourist attractions,such as Xuanwu lake,Crow temple,Stone town and many modern factories and tall buildings,the tourist from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.