- 分享到:
如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇丰富度较好，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Nowadays we live in a society where new things appear constantly. Among these, online shoping is approved and accepted by more and more people especially youngster. people are prefer to purchase by internet rather than go window-shoping. And online shopping has been a fashion. As we all know ,every thing has two sides. So online shopping is no exception. Online shopping can save our time because we no longer need to go window-shopping one by one. And we can aslo make our choice in many kinds of commodities showed on the internet. So every one can find a commodity he or she wants to buy. That we can't contact the commodity makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. we might be confused by superficial information so as to purchase wrong thing. What's more, security problem also is a challenge we must face. Sometimes you have paid for a commodity but can't receive it. As far as I am concerned, we should open our eye biger and purchase on the internet carefully. We should make good use of online shopping. he
