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使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；单词拼写做的很好，但文中词汇表达贫乏。
A beautiful city in China A foreign friend of mine is going to my honetown next week, I want to introduce Chinese Beijing, it's our country's central. The beijing is our country's political economy,and it is the Chinese history city, the new China is become in this. I will introduce the city to her, firstly, I want to let her know our country's history, secondly, I want to her fall in love with our country, thirdly, I will let her think that she memorise this city. The beijing is very good. I love it, so I want to that everyone loves it.
