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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin2163.com Date:Dec.26th,2015 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Your company new product in New York at Dec.15th to 22th.I be interestied in your company new product.If you have a time,please send your company price list and instruction with me.I very interesting for your company new product.Thank you for your conperation.And hope ours will establish business relationship. Yours sincerely, Hu Bin
