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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6328
要求:
题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;文章词汇使用比较恰当,高级词汇积累不足;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in China,it has been celebrating by Chinese people for more than 2000 years.In lunar May 5th Poeople often do lots of traditional activities to celebrate this day. It is said that in the warring states period of China,a loyal officier named Qu Yuan couldn't bear the corrupt states of his country and suicided himself by dropping into the river.People in this country felt very sad about his death and they didn't want the fish to eat Qu Yuan's body.So they went boating to seek Qu Yuan's boay and dropped the rice-pudding into the river because they believed if the fish ate the rice-pudding they won't eat Qu Yuan's body.Graduately, the custom was kept and every Chinese people in the lunar May 5th would eat rice-pudding and go to dragon boat race.Traditional Chinese rice-pudding is made of rice,Chinese date,and bamboo leaf.Fragrant rice is covered by the bamboo leaf.In addition,people often put the mugwort in front of their house hoping to eliminate the whole family's disaster. As far as i'm concerned, the dragon boat festival is a national festival in China.People do the same things together-eating rice pudding,honoring one person, and feel happy and warm in that day.

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