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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9786
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;文中衔接词丰富。

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The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far.For instance, clothes swathed in tissue paper,placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags,imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes.The reason why it appears? The first of reason is the rapid development of the society in material things.With the excessive competition in the business,the merchants attempt to come with all kinds of ideas to attract customer attention and increase their desire on purchase.The second sending some presents to superior,people have formed a general consensus already during the festival.So the merchants make full use of cultural psychology what is becoming a mainstream gradually in festival. In my first of view, the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and affect the people lifestyle to some extent.In aspect,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as fashion,this is not welcome.So it's necessary to take measures for us,first,we should raise people's awareness that the excessive packaging didn't equal high quality.In addition,the government must be issued some policies to restrict the excessive packaging.

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