如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Good evening,ladies and getlemen.I am Eva,I am happy to share my speech to you. I guess all of us have heard about the story of Huishi's Big Gourd.Huishi's gourd is to big to know how to use it propertly.Huishi thought that it was useless.But Zhuanfzi broke the routine and realized the value of the big gourd.What I have learnt from the story is we should consider a thing from different aspects.