高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；连词使用偏少。

Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city. Nanjing,located on the southeast of China,is the capital of Jiangsu province.It has a population of nearly 5 million.Nanjing has a history of more than 2400 years,there were ten dynasties established in it.The climate is pleasant.There are many tourist attractions,such as Xuanwu lake,Crow temple,Stone town and many modern factories and tall buildings,the tourist from all over the world come to appreciate its scenery. I'm sure you will have a good time here. Thank you