作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.I am Eva,and I am happy to share my speech to you. I believe all of us have heard about the story of Huishi's Big Gourd.Huishi's gourd is to big to use it propertly.Huishi thought that it was useless.But Zhuanfzi broke the routine and realized the value of the big gourd.What I have learnt from the story is that we should consider a thing from different aspects.