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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达丰富度较高，就是高级词汇用的太少；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.I am Eva,and I am happy to share my speech to you. I believe all of us have heard about the story of Huishi's Big Gourd.Huishi's gourd is to big to use it propertly.Huishi thought that it was useless.But Zhuanfzi broke the routine and realized the value of the big gourd.What I have learnt from the story is that we should consider a thing from different aspects. Success from directional thinking began to break.Stinky tofu is a famous characteristic snack.At ancient time,a man sold tofu for a living.One day,it did not sell out during the summer day.He felt pity to throw it away so he decided to pickle the rest of tofu.A afer several days,though it smells rotten,eat sweet.Since then the man and his stinky tofu to be known all over the world.And it proves that a change of perspective with different from ordinary people's way of thinking can help us get out of the new road.
