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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71658
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.I am Eva,and I am happy to share my speech to you. I believe all of us have heard about the story of Huishi's Big Gourd.The gourd is to big to use it propertly.Huishi thought that it was useless.But Zhuanfzi broke the routine and realized the value of the big gourd.What I have learnt from the story is that we should consider a thing from different aspects. Success from directional thinking began to break.Stinky tofu is a famous characteristic snack.At ancient time,a man sold tofu for a living.One day,it did not sell out during the summer day.He felt a pity to throw it away so he decided to pickle the rest of tofu.Aafer several days,though it smells rotten,eats sweet.Since then the man and his stinky tofu to be known all over the world.And it proves that a change of perspective with difference from ordinary person's way of thinking can help us get out of the new road.

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