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Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.I am Eva,and I am happy to share my speech to you. I believe all of us have heard about the story of Huishi's Big Gourd,right?Someone say yes ,but someone say no. This story mainly tells that Huishi and zhuangfzi how to realize the value of the big gourd.First off, the gourd is to big to use it properly.Huishi thought that it was useless.But Zhuanfzi broke the routine and realized the value of the big gourd.What I have learnt from the story is that we should consider a thing from different aspects. Success from directional thinking began to break.Stinky tofu is a famous characteristic snack.At ancient time,a man sold tofu for a living.One day,it did not sell out during the summer day.He felt a pity to throw it away so he decided to pickle the rest of tofu.Aafer several days,though it smells rotten,eats sweet.Since then the man and his stinky tofu to be known all over the world.And it proves that a change of perspective with difference from ordinary person's way of thinking can help us get out of the new road.