作者词汇基础不错,还请增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.I am Eva,and I am happy to share my speech to you. I believe all of us have heard about the story of Huishi's Big Gourd,right?Someone says yes,but someone says no. This story mainly tells us that Huishi and zhuangzi how to realize the value of the big gourd.First off, the gourd is to big to use it properly.Huishi thought that it was useless.But Zhuanfzi broke the routine and realized the value of the big gourd.What I have learnt from the story is that we should consider a thing from different aspects. Success from directional thinking began to break.Stinky tofu is a famous characteristic snack.At ancient time,a man sold tofu for a living.One day,it did not sell out during the summer day.He felt a pity to throw it away so he decided to pickle the rest of tofu.After several days,though it smells rotten,eats delicious.Since then the man and his stinky tofu to be known all over the world.And it proves that a change of perspective with difference from ordinary person's way of thinking can help us get out of the new road. Different thinking ways have different results.The most important, ways of thinking decided to a person's life. I would like to give you a example which I read in the book.There were two employees to apply for the position of the sales manager.Their test was to sell wooden comb to monk.One had a good sales performance for his open mind,however,the other thought it was impossible because the monk has no hair. Obivosly,the former one got the position and fought the way to success.