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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
Be Careful With Our Money As far as for me concerned , we should be careful with our money in daily life as students Firstly, we are students now who generally don't have a living for themselves The money we spend isn't ours but our parents' They work hard to support us with a happy enjoyful educated life They are the traditional chinese parents who love their children unconditional Secondly We are ordinary people and don't have countless money I consider that money should be used reasonably for example we can buy our favorite books with our saved money ,which can borad our horizen It's also beneficial for building up to learn a sport we love The saved money can be used to buy gifts for our friends or relatives Thirdly Saving money is the chinese traditional virtue dated from 5 thousands years ago We are chinese and had this goodness in essence How can't we follow it In conclusion, we should establish a positive value for money -make money in right way ,spend money in resonable way ,save money in clever way
