高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city. Nanjing,located on the southeast of China,is the capital of Jiangsu province.It has a population of nearly 5 million.Nanjing has a history of more than 2400 years,there were ten dynasties established in it.The climate is pleasant.There are many tourist attractions,such as Xuanwu lake,Jiming temple,Stone town.It also has many modern factories and high buildings,the tourist from all over the world come to appreciate its scenery. I'm sure you will have a good time here. Thank you.