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2006年山东高考写作范文:介绍美丽家乡

发布时间:2013-06-20 17:59浏览次数:1007
要求:

假设你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游,特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点,写一封回信,并表示盼望他的到来。


旅游资源
许多世界著名的风景名胜,如九寨沟(海子:清澈见底;色彩斑斓)都江堰水利工程(2,000多年历史;仍在发挥作用)


相关信息

气候适宜;交通方便


注意:

    1.词数100左右,信的格式及开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

    2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    3.参考词汇:
    省份-province
    海子-lake

    都江堰水利工程-Dujiangyan Irrigation Project


Dear Nick,    I’m glad to hear that you′re coming to Sichuan in August.
                                                     Yours sincerely,
                                                           Li Hua
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

I live in a quiet, old town, where there is no mountain or sea, only a group of good people and a row of ancient walls, welcome to my hometown - Wen'an Langfang. Here in ancient times called the low-lying land, its role is in Beijing and Tianjin floods, in order to protect the big cities will flood to here. This town is so great in my heart, also gave birth to a group of dedicated people. Here, we can to the walls of the park to see a look, feel the ancient local flavor, and high walls and thick, showing that the ancient Chinese craftsmanship of the construction process. We can also go to the water park to play, where there is a wooden path along the river, we can chat with the day to enjoy the water of the swans and the shuttle's cruise. In the evening, at night, we can go to Forest Park to listen to the singers, quiet and comfortable. Come to my hometown, although can't give you the noble enjoyment, but can give you a quiet beautiful memory, quiet and comfortable life will make you linger.

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