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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33640
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用。

用户练习作文:

Save money is important in our life We all need money, we all want to be rich, but money doesn’t’t come easily. Some people think it is not good to make people became smart consumers. But in my eyes, saving money intelligently is a most important ability in our daily life. First, you must be frugal, you should be careful with your money, and be a conservative spender. Live within your means and your budget, never spend more than you make. Manage money wisely can also help you live through the hardship. Second, pay yourself . The easiest way to save money rather than spending it is to make sure that that you never get a chance to spend the money in the first place. What's more,arranging for a portion of each paycheck to be deposited directly into a savings account or a retirement account takes the stress and tedium out of the process of deciding how much money to save and how much to keep for yourself each month . At last, set reasonable savings goals. It's a lot easier to save if you know you have something to save for. Set yourself savings goals that are within your reach to motivate yourself to make the tough financial decisions needed to save responsibly. For serious goals like buying a house or retiring, your goals may take years or decades to achieve. In these cases, it's important to monitor your progress on a regular basis. Only by stepping back and taking a look at the big picture can you get a sense for how far you've come and how far you have left to go. Choosing a saving money life style not only benefit our personal economy situation but also build on a right attitude about money.Only in this way can we became a smart consumer and a wise man in life.

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