简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I have a good friend. She is very beautiful. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red month. She has a good voice. She is good at singing and dancing. She is a smart girl. She likes reading. She reads a lot of books. She also likes playing the piano. She is so nice that everyone likes her very much.