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As we grow up,we encounter with many people and we make many different friends.With the different degree of studying and the difference of chosing careers,the financial disparity is gradually various.As for me,whatever you are rich or poor,it is no matter. Firstly,everyone is equal.We have the same rights.Don't look down upon the low incomersor feel ashamed about youself when you don't have a great salary.Secondly,money is not the way to define who is your friend and who is not.The world is changeable,you will never know what will happen next time.If someone treat you as a friend because of your money,then when you lose your money,definately,you will lose your friend,if you still call them a true friend. So don't take money so serious when you make friends with others.The world is variable,there are so many other things,such as hobbies,TV programs and beautiful scene,for you to chart with.Above all,financial don't disparity affects friendship.
