托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Nowadays,some people claim that living in a rural area is superior to living around a lot of people.As far as I am concerned,I prefer living in the cities.There are several reasons for my opinion. First of all,with the development of the economy,cities are more convenient than the countryside.If you are ill,it's not far away from the nearest hospital.Nonetheless in a rural area,medical cause is not advanced,and it will have an effect on your health. Second,educational systems are advanced in cities.There are many laboratories and a great variety of books in school.Your children can acquire a better education than those in the countryside.Then your kids will be more unsurpassed in many fields. Third,one of the reasons why people don't want to live in the city is because of the pollution,however,in my opinion,technology is rapidly developing and the pollution will be dealt with.At that time,there are also blue sky and clean water in the cities. Last but not least,although there are a great deal people in the city,we can learn how to get along with persons,it will help in our life and career.And we can also get help from our neighbors,workmates and so on. In conclusion,I enjoy living in the cities.