2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

If you were a smoker,you want to quit smoking,what's the most important point?For another example,if you meet a difficulty,what can help you to come over it？Yes,the answer is the strong will. As it says：“the strong will is the important guarantee of success.It fits everybody.If you want to success,you must have a strong will.If you have a strong will,you can overcome all kinds of difficulty.If you have a strong will,you will be confident.If you have a strong will,you may approach to success.On the contrary,you will fail.What's more only the people that has a strong will can accomplish the great mission. In a word,the strong will is very important.So do to our students.So as a student,we need study hard.Fighting for being a useful person to our motherland.