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作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
With more and more teenagers students becoming addicted to television, and with more and more diseases such as obesity and near-sightedness are proved to be TV-related diseases, some parents, teachers, and educators are complaining that television is causing more and more problems. However, I believe that television, despite its negative aspects, is a good thing on the whole. In the first place, watching TV has the value of sheer relaxation. After a whole day's tedious and tiresome work, one can get relaxed and refreshed while watching TV. In addition to being a source of relaxation, television is a most convenient source of entertainment. With numerous programmes in store, all one has to do is just to press a button, select his or her favorite channels. Most important of all, television is educational. From preschoolers to adult students, everybody can get educated from different courses given on television. From the above discussion, we can use the television to relax, to have fun, and to make ourselves smarter. Then we criticize it for its negative influence, we must bear in mind that television is a servant, not a master. Wiserly used, television can be a good thing on the whole.
