语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
It is disadvisable that you get a result at once whatever you see or whatever you listen.As a going says:"before make a decision,think it over."Every coins have two sides,if you conclu at once ,you just see the only one side.It means you just see the good sides or bad sides.
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