2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

My name is ZhangXiaoyu , 24 years old this year. I graduated from MinZu University of China in the Communication engineering , now studying in College of Computer and Communication in the software engineering profession. My hometown is Hebi city, in HeNan province,a new development district. Easy-going and a little introverted are both my personality,it means I need a comparative long time to get along well with others . My hobby is billiards and chess, with enjoying entertainment and considering simultaneously. Although my English foundation is not well, but I still enjoy studying it . My favorite sentence is: efforts is beyond genius. It's my honnor to become one of the students in class 13 to study together,in the hope that can learn English well and pass CET6.