2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

My name is ZhangXiaoyu,24 years old this year.I graduated from MinZu University of China in the Communication engineering,now studying in College of Computer and Communication in the software engineering profession. My hometown is Hebi city, in HeNan province,a new development district. Easy-going and a little introverted are both my personality,it means I need a comparative long time to get along well with others . My hobby is billiards and chess, with enjoying entertainment and considering simultaneously. Although my English foundation is not well, but I still enjoy studying it . My favorite sentence is: efforts is beyond genius. It's my honnor to become one of the students in class 13 to study together,in the hope that can learn English well and pass CET6.