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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

I am firmly convinced that snap judgements can't be trusted for several reasons. Firstly making judgements snapply usually means failing to take the real situation into careful accounts, which adds to error possibilities of the judgements.What is worse, following snap judgements may cause terrible outcomes especially in making important decisions. Consequently, we should acquire the ability to verify whether the judgements are snap or not. Some suggestions do good to cultivate the ability. First of all, we should form the good habit of having an overview of the situation, helping us form our own judgements. Besides, it is vital for us to be critical and dare to question so-called authorized and snap judgements. Last but not least, if we follow the snap judgement and lead things to something wrong, it is neccessary for us to abandon the snap judgement and adjust our decisions. In all, it is intelligent for us to have our own critical judgements and not to trust the snap judgements.

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