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Teacher's Day today is the annual festival teacher's day and i'd like to say thank you to all the teachers whether they taught me or not,they pave the way for us and don't care about their money,time and health.their behaviours symbolize roses given,gragrance in hand the moment my thought fall back to the past,what stands out is my teacher's encourgement.Then i was only ten and i brrowed a book from her,after i read that ,there was an unexpected thing happened---a bottle of ink which without the gap just dropped and the book was immersed in it. i was shocked and frightend,i did not know how to do but only gave it back to the teacher,but out of my exception,she didn't lose her temper and told me to e cautious next time. i felt sorry about that even the teacher forgived me.The book was on the market so i bought it by my pocket money,which is waht i could do to pay back my teacher
