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From:Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date:2008.12.23 To:sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Mr.John, We have received 3000 products from your company on 22th.December.However,according to our singing of the No.35 order,the amount of the products should be 3500.Yet we haven't received another 500 products.Thus please check your product list,and we are lookng forward to your early reply! thanks a lot! Yours, Wanghaiyang
