语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
As we can see from this cartoon,both of the two men need a boat simultaneously to help themselves out.One will soon make a small boat by utilizing branches around him whose his decision prompt made.But the another one who is facing to the rest of the tree,is hesitating whether to make a boat by the same way or waiting for others rescue.So two different final result coming out,one will surely leave away compared with the thinker who only have opportunity to leave.
人气:79发布:2017-05-01
人气:71发布:2014-09-19
人气:50发布:2014-08-14