2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。

As we can see from this cartoon,both of the two men need a boat simultaneously to help themselves out.One will soon make a small boat by utilizing branches around him whose decision prompt made.But another one who is facing to the rest of the tree,is hesitating whether to make a boat by the same way or waiting for others rescue.So two different final result coming out,one will surely leave away compared with the thinker who only has opportunity to leave.