语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
As we can see from this cartoon,both of the two men need a boat simultaneously to help themselves out.One will soon make a small boat by utilizing branches around him whose decision prompt made.But another one who is facing to the rest of the tree,is hesitating whether to make a boat by the same way or waiting for others rescue.So different two final results coming out,one will surely leave away compared with the thinker who only has an opportunity to leave.
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