文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
As we can see from this cartoon,both of the two men need a boat simultaneously to help themselves out.One will soon make a small boat by utilizing branches around him whose decision prompt made.But another one who is facing to the rest of the tree,is hesitating whether to make a boat by the same way or waiting for others rescue.So different two result coming out,one will surely leave away compared with the thinker who only has an opportunity to leave.
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