2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章用词灵活多样，但请注意增用高级词汇，单词拼写还要加强。

As we can see from this cartoon,both of the two men need a boat simultaneously to help themselves out.One will soon make a small boat by utilizing branches around him whose decision prompt made.But another one who is facing to the rest of the tree,is hesitating whether to make a boat by the same way or waiting for others rescue.So different two final result coming out,one will surely leave away compared with the thinker who only has an opportunity to leave. It make a sense to us:A journey of a thousand miles begains with a single step.You should more take action to achieve it immediately than keep in heart of its fantasy.Sometimes remote dream confuse you to think back contantly before you are more and more timidity so that stagnate your pace.Instead of being charmed,when you separate small targets from your whole dream before you make a dicision to complete each of its,then more and more close you reach for your dream.As the proverb goes:How can you sweep the world if you don't even clean up you room.Just as the boad-maker from this picture,he will sooner steer through the ocean reach for his successful coastline. Make yourself as a drop of water,and dripping for your aim, when wears through this 'stone' then your dream is coming.