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From:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date:2008.12.23 To:sales-department@hotmail.com Dears Mr,Johnson, First of all,I'd like to show my happiness to you for this cooperation.We have received 3000 products from your company on 22th,December which we had planed several days ago.However,according to our singing of the NO.35 order,the number of these goods should be 3500,and the other 500 ones haven't arrived here yet.On one hand,we are greatly in the belief that your company is very honest one.One the other hand,we are quite anxious about these goods.Thus please check your products list in your freely time.And we are looking forward to your early reply. Hoping you working well every day!Thanks a lot! Yours sincerely, Wanghaiyang
