文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
With the rapid development of society, people are increasingly advocating material gain. However, in the pursuit of material enjoyment, but also the spirit of the people much suffering. In particular, people are faced with a variety of pressures. We'll even often because of some little things, in bad mood.But if you want to accomplish one thing successfully, a good mood is a great supporting role.For Example,Archimedes when he discovered the Archimedes' principle of relaxed mood.If a person is in a bad mood, then things will bring emotions, which is affecting the development of events. Even counterproductive.All in all, only by maintaining a good mood, work more smoothly, the chances of success are even greater!