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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3138
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写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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The Fragrance Always Stay in The Hand That Gives The Rose As the old saying goes .The Fragrance Always Stay in The Hand That Gives The Rose.It means that if we help others we will happy.Helping others is our traditional virtue,it is our duty to develope this virtue . Helping others doesn, t need to pay a lot ,but can bring a lot of good things.We can help others in our daily life,we can direct the way for others who got lost;we can offer our seat to old people or pregnant women. However, some people are cheated when helping others,so they dare not help people who need help. Helping others can not only solve other,s problem but make us happy.In the process of helping others , the emotion can be boosted. By this way our ability that solved problems can be improved .The spirit of helping others is flourishing in our national,we have the obligation to glow in this spirit.Only by developing this spirit can we witness the harmonious of our society .With this spirit our national will become increasingly stronger. As far as I am concerned , every one shoulds offer our hand to those need help.only in this way can we make our society more loveliness.College students,as hope of country’sfuture,should have the consciousness of helping others.

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