【题目要求】
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.【题目分析】
同意或者不同意,都是错误的。不结合具体情况,无法判断哪一个更好。先比较两种沟通方式的优缺点(relative merits)然后根据不同的情况说明那种方式更好:跟老板、同事沟通,face-to-face communication更好;跟愤怒的投诉顾客,telephone更好一些;跟情人沟通,当然face-to-face更好。
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In our daily life, communication is the most nessary thing we have to do. But there are many types of ways to communicate with each other. Such as face-to-face communication, letters,emails and telephone calls. Different situation has different way. Firstly, when you have to meet your boss and colleagues, it is nothing better than face-to-face communication. Since you are a member of your company, when talking about some important things, you must meet your boss as much as close to him/her. It can not only show the respect to the boss but also show you think the thing important and make no effort to fall in it. In this case, the face-to-face communication is a better choice. Secondly, when you are far away your home and you do not have enough time to meet your family. It is that a better way to use another way to communicate with others, such as telephone call, the Internet and letters. The communication in Internet is much more convenient than others and cheaper than others. Also, it will save your time and you do not need to have a far tripe to go home. In short, it has its own benefit on each way to communicate, so you just need to choose a better way which fits for yourself. And choose the most convenient way.