文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;采用了一些简单的从句;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dno't trust your ears and eyes A saying goes that “whatever you see is trust", but i don't think so. By others way, It's foolish behavied. All i considers will as to follows: First and foremost, many suitations we saw that might created by someone who want to cheated your eyes and cover the truth. If you judge the problem from the phenoments that you had saw. Unforturnally, you are stupid one.
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