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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5949
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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用户练习作文:

As far as I'm concerned,I'd like to live in the city rather than countryside. Living in the city has a mount of advantages.There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax. 1、There are a miraculous educational resources ,so you can get a better education than in village.This is one of the most important thing for many people. 2、The traffic in cities is more convenient.You can go somewhere by plane、subway、bus or taxi.If you are live in a village,There's even no bus. 3、The city has more work positions for people to choose from. The above three reasons are why I like living in the city more than the countryside. Although the country's air quality is very good, there are too many not convenient. Therefore, I prefer to live in cities.

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