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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中简单句稍微偏多,从句用的不错;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

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Most people will give the first impression on things by watching or hearing. But in my opinion, if you draw a conclusion only by watching and hearing, you may make mistakes sometimes. Firstly, what you watch or hear is the information that other people give to you. It is hard that other people do not put their own thoughts in it, so many things may change original meaning. Secondly, you may just watch or hear somethings only in one aspect. It is so stupid to trust it with only little information. Finally watching and hearing may only explain the outside of things. What we should actually understand is the inner which need us not only watching or hearing but also think of it according to our watching, hearing, experience and so on. Thinking is dependent and objective, which let us can make decisions by ourselves not others. It is important to get information by watching and hearing. But without thingking by yourself, it is unwise to only believe whatever you watch and hear.

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