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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5735
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

We should find useful information Today, with the thchnology developing, we can easy to regain many information in our life.We enjoy it but we also bother the irrelevant information. How to aviod it? Here are some ideals to slove the problem. First, we should need a clearly idea. It means what information we need most. Second, we should find a method. We can pick up the information. Last,we ought to pay more attention the useful information. For example, I want to improve my English reading skill. I should scan the hole article. And find every important setence in the article. Becauce the important setence including infomation that I want most. In my opinion, if you want to find useful information, you should focus on what you want most. Then follow your ideal to pick it. Final, you can make it.

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