加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
We should find useful information Today, with the thchnology developing, we can easy to regain many information in our life.We enjoy it but we also bother the irrelevant information. How to aviod it? Here are some ideals to slove the problem. First, we should need a clearly idea. It means what information we need most. Second, we should find a method. We can pick up the information. Last,we ought to pay more attention the useful information. For example, I want to improve my English reading skill. I should scan the hole article. And find every important setence in the article. Becauce the important setence including infomation that I want most. In my opinion, if you want to find useful information, you should focus on what you want most. Then follow your ideal to pick it. Final, you can make it.