作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Meaningful life Summer has come and passed and three months has gone so fast. I don't know what I have done during the three months. I just waste my time to wandering daze and sleep. I feel very boring and emptiness. So wake me up when September ends, to have a meaningful life! I see the greenery turn to yellow little by little, taste the sour and sweet of orange, hear the wind touch the leaf, smell the Osmanthus flowers dancing in the air. Beautiful scenery leap to the eyes, made me taken on a new look. I began to think how can I do to take advantage of time and make it meaningful. Never too old to learn, learning is endless. Knowledge is permanent! It's interesting to talk to someone who lives in the pass time, it's amazing to see the world with the perspective of others, it's very glad thing when someone has the same idea with you even you have never seen them. In my view the reason why life is brilliant is that we can spend the time to something that we love to do!