1995年专四作文真题范文:Discuss part-time job

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There are a common phnomonen that many college students wants to take a part-time job in their spare time .We should take a serious attitude to these phnomonen .Taking part-time job not only has a good effect but also has a bad effect. For one things,there are three advantages of taking part-time job.Firstly,when a student takes a part-time job,he can earn some money.In some extent, he can reduce his parents burden.Secondly,students can learn lessons from the part-time job,that is to say,he can get more experience which is useful to his later life.Thirdly,when students do a part-time job,they will know that earning money is so hard,so maybe they will more save money. For another,taking part-time job does harm to some students in some way.For instance,students spent time on taking part-time job,then ,they will have less time for their study.At the same time,students cann't get more proper exercise in some part-time job,such us,waitress,page boy and so on.Last but not least,nowadays,the social is very complex but the college students are very simple,if the students find a part-time job.They are easy to be decived by the bad adult. All in all,the advantages and disadvantages are all exit.Students should banlance it by themselves.