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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment With the development of the technogy and soceity,people's life increasely become more and more colorful and rich.Consequently,they have the opportunities to travel the world,which brings the tourism to a booming business.However,some problems also appreance.I hold the view that tourism may bring harm to the environment. First of all,the air condition may be more and more polluted.With plenty of people travel,the traffic will be clowded.What's more,it will also add the pollusion to the astmosphere.Furthermore,some people do not protect the traditional visiting place,they paint whatever they want in the buildings.Thess behavoirs damage the old valuble views.Last but not at least,due to the fact that people lacking of respsonsiblity,some of them leave the rubbish everywhere. To tell the truth,although the tourism is of great benifet to economy,it also account for the bad consequence to the environment.Only when we come to protect the environment can the tourism make our life more brighter.
