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People hold various opinions for the purpose of life. Some think that they live for money, some for fame, some for fun. As to my opinion, I live for experiences, for experiences enable me to understand the true meaning of life. The first reason is that money and fame are not adequate for leading a happy life. I see that many people obsess with money and fame have no interest or time to enjoy family life, friendship, sightseeing and things like that. Money is important in life, but the money-only idea leads to a monotonous life. Sometimes, extreme money seekers or fame followers violate the law and hurt others for that end. Secondly, living just for fun is also unacceptable to me. Humans are different from animals in that they have feelings and emotions. In variably avoiding sadness and anger only makes people dull and less sensible. Now I will come back to my point for various experiences, whether they are failures or successes and happiness . To learn from all the experiences, to gain self-content in all the happenings, and to enjoy life from different angles, you will find your life worthwhile and meaningful.
