作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Nowadays,more and more people have realized the importance of health,but different people have various ways to keep healthy 。Some try to keep a balanced diet,the other exercise every day。In terms of me,i prefer the second one。 As we all know,whatever we do,we should have a healthy body。 Around the world,some people formed a habit of running,playing games,climbing,swimming and so on。Their aim only to have heath。Sports not only let us stay heathy,but also keep sharp。Meanwhile,running,swimming,climbing also improve the function of our heart and lung。If you want to stay heathy by keeping balanced diet,this is effective for some people,butthe people should stick to it。However,whatever some people eat,they will get fat。 In a word,i would exercise every day rather than keep a balanced diet。What is more,if i were full,i can lose weight by exercising。