2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句采用很棒；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

It's known to us that smoking is harmful to our health ,also bad to evironment. (There have a lot of diseases come from smoking such as lung cancer.)Smoking,which have an influence on these pelple who is never smoking,is able to lead to lots of deseases such as lung cancer.The probability of passive smokers even higner than smoker.Some people think it's cool to smoke,and others considering smoking can refresh himself.Nowadays,It's a great progress to us that the flag don't smoke have been hung in more and more public place.We should make lots of efforts in order to our health to forbid people smoking in public.