2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用。

It's known to us that smoking is harmful to our health,also bad to environment. Smoking,which have an influence on these people who are never smoking,is able to lead to lots of diseases such as lung cancer.The probability of passive smokers even higner than smoker.Some people think it's cool to smoke,and others considering smoking can refresh himself.Nowadays,It's a great progress to us that the flag don't smoke have been hung in more and more public place.We should make lots of efforts in order to our health to forbid people smoking in public.